Planning In The Future

I have several plannings when I graduate from UHAMKA. It is also can called my dream high. If I graduate from UHAMKA in beginning 2013, I will be an English teacher. Honesty I am still not sure with my decision to be an English teacher. Although I approximately dislike to be a teacher and children, but I will try to love them.  I want to  be an English teacher in my several favorite country such as South Korea, Japan, and Hong Kong. Besides, I intend to visit any places that it is famous places or beautiful places in each country. Specially South Korea, I hope I can stay in there for a long time. I want to meet my idols like Yoo Seung Hoo, Lee Hong Ki, etc. One of my several plannings  is backpacking. I want to be a backpacker. Firstly  I want to go around Indonesia. Next I hope I can go a road.  I want to be an English teacher in my previous elementary school, junior high school, or senior high school before. I will serve as an English teacher for a year. As feeling thank to my previous school. Despite I know that man just proposes and God disposes,but I believe that where there is a will there is a way. I can make my dream high comes true. ( God willing) amin ^.^

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A long journey in the morning

            One of my friends in the V I class is Heflin Riandari who has a long journey to campus. Her journey to the University of Prof.DR. HAMKA, also known as UHAMKA , is begun at 6 o’clock. She rides motorcycle from her house which it is located in North Bekasi, but she parks her motorcycle in Kranji Station. Then she has to cross railway in Kranji Station. After that she continues her journey by bus P9B to our beloved campus which it is located in East Jakarta. Actually her house is in North Bekasi, but she takes a bus P9B East. For arrive to the in front of campus, she still has to take a transportation. I think Her journey to the campus is long and unique, because her route is from North to West and end in East. However, I am proud with her. Even though her journey is long, she is never absent to came to the class. For me she is a wonder girl who can pass the challenge during goes to the campus.

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